Until you come by.
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brieflyfeltwhats spoken is teenange emotion
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he makes be blossom, more than he knows

Until you come by.

by brieflyfelt

When my teacher ask where I see myself in ten years, I no longer have a future view of myself and a successful career

but a thought about my brother and if he’s going to make it by, for another year.

Now you see, the thoughts of you and me, is how i get by.

Its how I thrive between cancer filled walls till you come by.

And when you do drop by, my mind suddenly fly, take me places where life is filled with family, healthy brother and successful career

and when you say goodbye my mind goes on standby, back to everyday life where my brother might die.

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a year ago
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a year ago
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brieflyfeltwhats spoken is teenange emotion
a year ago
Dear cancer.



brieflyfeltwhats spoken is teenange emotion
a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil thank you :) your smile always gets a bit bigger when its coming from you, glad you liked it

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
This is compelling and unselfish. Your meter in each verse is immaculate. The power of your words swayed me. Great job!!!

brieflyfeltwhats spoken is teenange emotion
a year agoReply
@sydney it's a little part of a 4 page long letter i wrote for him, a couple of weeks ago :) thank you very much

sydneyVerifiedco-creator of Commaful
a year agoReply
Wow! So powerful ❤️