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berry_rose sometimes the words i write become poems
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an older poem i wrote around 2017 hehe. i really like this one and i was really happy when the opportunity to post it for today's theme presented itself. hope u like it!

little details

have you ever been amazed?

have you ever been truly

have you ever been truly amazed?

amazed.

amazed. like,

amazed. like, truly stunned.

amazed. like, truly stunned. so amazed that--

i can't put it into words.

isn't it amazing

isn't it amazing how an incredible feeling can be described using

isn't it amazing how an incredible feeling can be described using simple words

but understood so clearly?

isn't it amazing

isn't it amazing how someone can do something incredible using

isn't it amazing how someone can do something incredible using simple acts

but impact so many?

amazing.

amazing. like,

amazing. like, truly amazing.

amazing. like, truly amazing. so amazing that--

i can't put it into words.

isn't it amazing

isn't it amazing how the sky can be more than

just a sky

it can be

it can be a muted turquoise blue,

it can be a muted turquoise blue, illuminated by the sun,

it can be a muted turquoise blue, illuminated by the sun, and scattered with

it can be a muted turquoise blue, illuminated by the sun, and scattered with off white,

it can be a muted turquoise blue, illuminated by the sun, and scattered with off white, feathery,

it can be a muted turquoise blue, illuminated by the sun, and scattered with off white, feathery, cotton-pulled clouds

isn't it amazing

isn't it amazing how the ground can be more than

just the ground

it can be a

it can be a daisy filled,

it can be a daisy filled, poppy covered meadow

it can be a daisy filled, poppy covered meadow with dancing,

it can be a daisy filled, poppy covered meadow with dancing, caribbean amber grass

isn't it amazing

isn't it amazing how a moment can be more than

just a moment

it can be filled with

it can be filled with laughter,

it can be filled with laughter, or tears,

it can be filled with laughter, or tears, or frowns,

it can be filled with laughter, or tears, or frowns, or smiles,

it can be filled with laughter, or tears, or frowns, or smiles, or all at the same time

it can be filled with laughter, or tears, or frowns, or smiles, or all at the same time and

it can be filled with laughter, or tears, or frowns, or smiles, or all at the same time and little details that go

it can be filled with laughter, or tears, or frowns, or smiles, or all at the same time and little details that go unnoticed,

it can be filled with laughter, or tears, or frowns, or smiles, or all at the same time and little details that go unnoticed, unappreciated,

leaving you

unamazed.

but it's those little details

but it's those little details that are the most

but it's those little details that are the most amazing.

truly amazing.

so amazing that--

i can't put it into words.

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