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bernardtwindwilGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
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Comments please. This is a work in progress. A tribute to women who reclaim their lives.

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by bernardtwindwil

Look, I am the soiled dove Often used never loved beginning from a tender age I'd nothing else by which to gage

the aim and purpose of all the flatter love I thought was the heart of the matter convinced my self heaven above forgave this emotional love

let him control my life thought I would be his wife At a hundred parties we'd attend He loaned me out to all his friends

He told me this was proof that I loved him Finally, I realized this life so grim I used my body to gain love it came like a bolt from above

I was just an object treated with gross disrespect fuck'm and the horse he rode in on I'm taking back my pudendum

self-respect and declaring me myself putting your love and bull shit on a shelf you'll never touch my nude body your lies about love are shoddy

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fallengracelost✨,wanderer🌟,young✌,wild mind👿
6 months agoReply
sir I'm in awe of you! you're basically the cool grandpa never had! loved it :)

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
10 months agoReply
@lesliejyh Thank you.

lesliejyhI'm Always Here 4 U My Baby Ko
10 months agoReply
Your work Is Short In Words but so Full of messages... I enjoyed reading your works!!!

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
10 months agoReply
@riverfr0zen Oh yes. A desultory glance at the US elections highlights that pervasive dominant male attitude. The women who accept the demeaning attitude and talk make me cringe.

riverfr0zenBronze Commawriter, programmer, photographer?
10 months agoReply
Like the empowering nature of this piece, the 'glass ceiling' so to speak (which is more than just corporate success, but pervades entire life) is so deceivingly invisible that it is necessary, I feel, to emphasize the issues therein.

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
10 months agoReply
@erofaer I brought up both my sons like that and they are both bringing up their sons like that but we are a dying breed.

erofaerSilver CommaHow can I be impressive in one sentence?
10 months agoReply
@bernardtwindwil I wish I saw more of them. I mean, I know boys my age who aren't like that, but they don't seem like they want to admit it. Even if they know what's better.

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
10 months agoReply
@dannibear1461 @itsmoeyyy @erofaer I was brought up in the old patrician way. I was taught to respect women and treat all women as if they were royalty. That upbringing ran head on like a train wreck into the misogynistic chauvinist attitude of most of the men toward women when I attended my university. The bullying and assaults and forcible physical dating were just wrong. I had a lot of girlfriends who would trust me to tell me what they had been through. I have not and never will join the "good old boys club". If a young lady has to have sex with a boy to prove they love them, that is prima faicie evidence of rape. Enough pontificating. There are plenty of truly good men to be had.

erofaerSilver CommaHow can I be impressive in one sentence?
10 months agoReply
Your understanding for things which most people, often men, don't get, is incredible.

dannibear1461Bronze CommaMum, Novice at poetry
10 months agoReply
I love how you've tackled this. It has gone on for years men preying on women for sex with the illusion of "love" . A basic human emotion that should be pure and not for self satisfaction for manipulation.