Crazy
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bernardtwindwilGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
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Crazy

by bernardtwindwil

Odd or eccentric behavior a deviation from the norm

Given, our present society, you would be crazy to conform

The constraints of social order leave me lukewarm

We are drastically in need of a complete reform

Maybe we can use commaful.com as a means to brainstorm.

I really can't think of a more appropriate platform

Y'all can't be held to task for my generation's bad form

Until your behavior and morals are forced to be uniform

I recommend you take your place in history by storm

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I really like the format and challenge of writing a commaful piece. The word limit forces brevity and the images can add so much to the story. I like your idea of using it for activism messages and as an agent for change. I'm going to think about that for a future post.