Scene snippet I would appreciate feedback/criticism on

Looking at the destruction from her tiny raft, floating far away from the island, Abby couldn’t help but feel utter despair. There was no returning now. She couldn’t mend any of her broken relationshi...

A contemplation of death and meaning through the eyes of a daughter who just lost her father.

The live vivisection from the movie Mad God from the perspective of the scavenger. You don't need to have watched the movie to understand.

A study on revenge, grief, and self loathing Just as quickly as the thought flickers through her mind it vanishes and an overwhelming nausea takes its place. She’s so sick of herself. She he...

Dawn contemplates the meaning of loss during her struggle with trauma in a post apocalyptic world. "Dawn couldn’t help but feel like he was right. She was free and yet she didn’t feel free at all. Sh...