Missing puzzle pieces- a poem.
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Don't try to fix me, i have to fix myself.

Missing puzzle pieces- a poem.

by ashleyciera

I hope you can forgive me for i can't seem to fall in love. and that's what seems to be raking everyone's minds love, love, falling in love

such a concept that is, the mere thought of a beautiful beginning and hopeful forever that sends me shaking and turning away grey eyes, dark brown, your eyes are all the same to me

i can't seem to fall in love with their eyes I long desperately for the days i wasn't uncertain i had hope, hope in my heart i felt i could never be apart from another whom i've grown to love

who are they? where are they? I can't seem to find them. so i hope you can forgive me, and love someone else, for i am a broken puzzle, with pieces missing everywhere you can't solve me,

you can't fix me. Don't waste your time.

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bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
I have also had these feelings. It was many winters in the past. I think that message is timeless and will find a universal response. The mechanics of the poem were set in a measure that enabled more impact for the written words. Those words were chosen, obviously, with great care. The stanza length was so well planned that it made the poem that more poignant. Good job.

rainandsnowBronze Commabooks+music=true love
a year agoReply
indeed very eloquent! keep continuing. :)

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a year agoReply
@ashleyciera this was amazing :) :) as @erofaer mentioned, you will for sure make an impact on people's lives! you're an amazing poet with great ideas!

erofaerSilver CommaHow can I be impressive in one sentence?
a year agoReply
Trust me, you will make an impact with poems like these!!!!!

a year agoReply
@ashleyciera awww that's amazing :D

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a year agoReply
@jeremiah Thank you so much. It's been my dream to share my poems and have an impact on people, i'm glad to know i'm able to live my dream because of you guys.

a year agoReply
whoa! powerful