your mirage in the desert of my heart
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asesari
asesarihelp the earth
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here it is... it took a better shape then i expected< br/>this is my first poem about love < br/>< br/>< br/>*English isn't my native language. I apologize for every mistake i have done so far, and i will make in the future.*

your mirage in the desert of my heart

by asesari

there you are

standing in front of the door

i am asking 'why...

why do you always want more?'

you are smiling, this isn't real

it can't be real because

you left a long time ago and your left caused

a catastrophe

a fatal longing

a thirtiness to you

in the desert of my heart

i am still a hopeless wanderer

and i wonder

will your mirage be enough to fill the darkness in my heart

even a little bit?

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asesariBronze Commahelp the earth
a year ago

when...

I thought about 'when's for my first story. *Engl...

asesariBronze Commahelp the earth
10 months ago

studying made my brain melt

i'm feeling the PAIN

asesariBronze Commahelp the earth
a year ago

i don't feel okay

these days are not okay. i don't know what to do.



asesariBronze Commahelp the earth
a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil Oh thank you so much again and again ! Nobody is perfect so i don't worry about all the mistakes i make , becuase i think mistakes are what make us humans, we learn and we improve. I know that i will be better if i keep learing and improving.

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
Nothing to worry about you wrote a beautiful poem. The images were intense. There were a couple of mispellings but I knew what you meant. Great work!!!!