Up and down
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Up and down

by ameagami

Once upon a time

I was walking up life's stairs I heard a desperate call for help I looked back and there you were In rock bottom with defeated eyes And broken legs

For some reason

I carried you on my back , we climbed few steps Holding hands we limped up few steps

Suddenly

I felt sharp pain that sent shivers down my spine I saw the blade that went through my heart It belonged to the dagger you used to stab my back

I watched you walk up life's stairs While off them I was falling down Rumor has it that you reached the top When my lifeless body hit the ground

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7 months agoReply
@bernardtwindwil Thank you so much, I'm so happy you liked it

bernardtwindwilGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
7 months agoReply
Wow, this was a punch in the gut, or should I say a knife in the heart. Your wording and verses conveyed so much emotion that it increased the impact of this poem. Great job!!!