Flickering lights

ameagamiCommunity member
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Flickering lights

by ameagami

For the first time in years I managed to crawl an inch forward

To others

I'm still no where near getting a life Which is true

To me

I feel like I'm walking on the moon

Considering the fact that for the last 6 years I've been watching everyone moving forward in the speed of light While I was pinned down to rock bottom

Without a doubt I will see the slightest movement as an improvement

Even though my life still a complete and utter mess But I feel like I have a chance

It's like I've been living in the dark for a really long time To the point I forgot how life looked like And out of the sudden I saw hope's flickering light

It was just for a second But for a second I saw something other than pitch black

I don't know if it's going to flicker again But I know I'm going to enjoy this hopeful feeling as long as I can 

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ameagamiBronze CommaCommunity member
6 months ago
Just give it a try

ameagamiBronze CommaCommunity member
9 months ago

ameagamiBronze CommaCommunity member
6 months ago
No losers among us

8 months agoReply
@bernardtwindwil thank you very much , your kind words means the world to me

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
8 months agoReply
I loved this poem. It is truthful and an honest introspection. Your word choice is incredibly rich and descriptive. Great job!!!!!!