Just a shell of a broken doll.
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alonerUsing words as drawings. Just call me C.
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Just a shell of a broken doll.
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Just a shell of a broken doll.

by aloner

You talk to me.

You observe my fixed expression.

But at last,

I was made this way.

There's no telling why I was.

I just am.

I'm just here.

Perhaps if you were to look closer,

to stare into my glass eyes, perhaps you'd see

just a shell of a broken doll.

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alonerUsing words as drawings. Just call me C.
9 months agoReply
@bernardtwindwil thank you!

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
9 months agoReply
This was an incredibly wistful metaphor. The empty doll and the empty girl. The metaphor was written masterfully. Your word choice never went into the cloyingly maudlin so often seen. Great post!!!