Beyond recognition
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Beyond recognition

by alexgray

The foulest of thought; of burning corporeal beauty

Can not begin to comprehend the loathsome hatred that burns

Tering the very fabric of what little of me onse existed

Nothing but empty words of what ones were, but are no more

I'm not giving up;

I'm just giving in

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bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
8 months agoReply
Well, that ended on a desultory note. You used really good technique of bringing the damning statements to the forefront and leaving an ominous gap in what the reader is told and what he imagines. Great work!!!