Trippin'
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alecpanosI write for me and for you
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Trippin'

by alecpanos

I'm walking. Paced not fast but not slow. Looking forward.

Thinking Sideways

There are things around me . Making noise. Catching my eye.

Distractions

How could i expect . How could i prepare.

I could have tied my laces. To be fair

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5 months agoReply
@yourstrulymaryz thank you so much for the response I'm glad you liked the poem! I appreciate feedback no matter how much, cause it's always welcome😁

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5 months agoReply
I'm not lying when I say that literature is a big part of my life, but from the many works I have read, this was one of the most touching. Had you gone and tried to add more feeling or more meaning, the poem would have not been this innocent. Some might call it shallow, but I like to refer to works like this as, "the tip of the iceberg", as Earnest Hemingway might. You show us what's above the water so we can determine how big the iceberg truly is below sea level. You pick a topic everyone can relate to, and then everyone can find a deeper meaning. Sorry for writing an entire freaking novel in your comments section. 😜😂😊

alecpanosI write for me and for you
8 months agoReply
@bernardtwindwil coolio glad you liked it

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
8 months agoReply
I loved it. This was very free-wheeling and happy-go-lucky. You made my day. Great post!!!