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A piece for @whoknowsreally ; a most unique member of this community. A Collab innitiated by @kevenadams 🧑 🀩

https://commaful.com/play...

m a k e m e f o r g t

Ever since that day I've been kindling a fire

deep inside a place

deep inside a place where no tremors

deep inside a place where no tremors cast their shade.

No one knows what goes in there;

but when solitude aggravates

but when solitude aggravates the fire tends to accentuate.

that's when a bit of copper

that's when a bit of copper finds it's place above the flame

that's when a bit of copper finds it's place above the flame and red-brown twirls,

that's when a bit of copper finds it's place above the flame and red-brown twirls, like locks hanging on your face,

would bounce against the light

and make me forget

of any problem

which blinded

m y m i n d

end.

If you want to know a bit more about this piece, you can continue to read. Otherwise click out, and thank you very much for your time and attention!! 😊 πŸ™ πŸ₯°

I won't share any personal details of my conversation with @whoknowsreally; but I wanted to say how strong the inspiration that she gave to me was. (weird phrasing 🀯)

I never wrote anything like this. I don't really know if it's any good, but it feels right to me.

I definitely reached the ceiling of my skill because I can't make it any better with the knowledge I have.

I would also like to give a BIG anonymous THANK YOU to someone that has been teaching me about the site and the format.

This piece would have not been possible without that person's influence and help.

That's it, i hope you guys enjoyed it. @whoknowsreally: I hope this is to your liking πŸ¦„ 🌈 πŸ₯° 🌟 ❀️

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