Wake up
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adelinefeckerDeep thoughts over coffee...
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I could feel myself slipping
#poetry#depression#saddness#love#poetry

Wake up

Poetry by adelinefecker

I don't

wake up

this morning

light seeps color

into every part of the room but me

I don't

wake up

this afternoon

called your phone

and you still don't care about me

I don't

wake up

this evening

I don't

wake up

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8 months ago•Reply•
@bernardtwindwil You are totally right!
bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
8 months ago•Reply•
This is a delicate poem yet it exposes a brutal truth about people and their feelings of self-worth. You described it so accurately. I just have one thing to say please learn by repetition or whatever. Do not let your mood depend on the weather, the circumstances , or another person. Great post!!!! Stay tough.
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