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adelinefeckerDeep thoughts over coffee...
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I shook the ground, I pulled oceans, I summoned the sky, and still you left (PART 1)

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PART 1

I shook the ground with

words I thought would move mountains that had

No effect on you

but tore me coast to coast

I pulled oceans to

your front door to cleanse you and never made it

over your walls

but drowned everything

I summoned the sky's fury

to speak the truths loud enough for you to hear even when

you have your ears plugged

but shut out my own lights

You moved somewhere prettier

Part 2 coming soon! Please like and comment <3

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3 months agoReply
@bernardtwindwil @kristasiemion Thank you!!!

4 months agoReply
Loved the imagery!

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
4 months agoReply
This is beautiful. I am looking forward to the follow on parts. Great job!!!!!