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A love poem by adelinefecker
She chose him because
his eyes reminded her of maple syrup on sunday mornings
She chose him because
his voice reminded her of rain hitting the city pavement
She chose him because
his mind reminded her of a temple Indiana Jones would discover
She chose him because
his laughter was like an earthquake that reformed her walls
She chose to let him infect her
day by day and said nothing While he chose someone else
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a year ago•Reply•
@jeremiah Thank you!
a year ago•Reply•
@stridder75 very true! Over time I was able to find peace but at first it was hard.
a year ago•Reply•
wow very powerful twist! well done
a year ago•Reply•
I definetly know how it is to fall for someone only to be sitting on the sidelines as life passes by. The ripping feeling of seeing them form possible relationships with other people, because it's not you. But if they're happy, the sense of peace that at least one of you can walk away with love.
a year ago•Reply•
Great twist at the end. It is so sensitive and hopeful. On the lkast sentence you unload the cannon on the reader. Great job. There is a great flow and rhythm. The words were obvioustly precisely chosen to help the ending. Great job.
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