What They Don't Know Part 1

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I'm actually writing this book on Wattpad as it was originally suppose to be written there, but I kind of want to know your opinion so please comment below!!

What They Don't Know Part 1

by _notlikeothers_

Everyone has someone in their life

That tells them how to get through horrible times, a shoulder to lean on for support or a person they trust with everything, but she had no-one...

Of course she had friends,

But they were only with her because of her money and popularity, and she knew that the moment one of them saw her break down, they would use that against her.

Her parents weren't exacly the best,

Because they paid more attention to their work than towards their only daughter. She tried to be the perfect daughter for them, but their work was slightly more important then their only heritor

She stopped trying to live up to their expectations

And decided to interfear. She began staying out late, drinking, fighting and completly changed herself, but before it could get out of hand, they decided to send her away...

As she got farther away from her 'family',

She realized that she didn't need them or anyone for that matter, and for that she was greateful.

She could finally stop doing all the things she dreaded...

She could finally stop drinking, She could finally sleep early, She could finally read all day if she wished And finally stop being rude...

Yes, she started doing all of those things because of them.

To get their attention mainly, but they didn't want her...

They never did...

When she arrived at the place where she knew she would

Get her freedom and finally be abel to be herself, she couldn't help but smile at the thought of finally starting over...

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a year ago
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Long time no write guys! But I'm back now! Hope yo...

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a year ago
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_notlikeothers_Bronze CommaNotLikeOtherPeople🎈
a year agoReply
@emmahernndez You understood this completly and I guess I'm kind of proud that I could write such things

emmahernndezBronze CommaI love kind people. INFP.
a year agoReply
The feeling of the ending's just what I hope to find someday. The freedom. The feeling of the air finally getting right. Sometimes parents just weren't ready to become parents but they did it anyway.

_notlikeothers_Bronze CommaNotLikeOtherPeople🎈
a year agoReply
@lisa & @bernardtwindwil thank you for your kind words..I'm glad you liked my stories!!

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
This sounds like adolescent angst. You should get wide readership as it will resonate with teenager alive. Your wording was excellent.

lisaSilver CommaCats
a year agoReply
wowww what a story :O :O this is so good!!

galaxyangel234Hello!! My Wattpad: AliciaLynch1108
a year agoReply
Wow, I want to read more, that was so good