crushed
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317badlandsCommunity member
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crushed

by 317badlands

you never knew that i loved you

you probably never will

we talk all the time about all sorts of things

and the people you like

i wished you liked me like you like them

but you never will

i want to move on from you

but i just can't seem to

you broke my heart

and you don't even know you did so

it isn't your fault

you can't help it

i love you

and you don't love me.

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a year agoReply
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a year agoReply
You have written such a plaintice piece. It invokes sympathy for the protagonist. The bittersweeet nature is so succinct. You were able to bring off a lyrical piece even in free verse.

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a year agoReply
we have all been through this at some point :( is this happening to you right now?