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Betrayed Short Stories

Here are the top Betrayed short stories, fanfiction, poetry, and posts on Commaful, including topics like "selfie", "manipulate", and more.
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move, you're ruining my se...
kaladin Bronze Comma
a year ago
190
1
17

  • move

  • selfie

  • manipulate

  • anger

  • mean

    • ๐ƒ๐ข๐ž
    aamii_ Frequent Reader
    a year ago
    152
    0
    16

  • feelings

  • daily-prompt

  • dailyprompt

  • die

  • doomed

    • I can't sleep :)
    RAGE
    musical_mutt Commaful Star
    4 years ago
    147
    0
    23

  • mad

  • rage

  • thoughts

  • mind

  • angry

    • Thoughts.
    Best Friend
    seraphicpearls Gifted Writer
    5 years ago
    122
    0
    8

  • betrayed

  • hurt-

  • hurt

  • sad

  • bestfriend

    • She was never my best friend.Just pretending to be
    Betrayal
    allayga Gifted Writer
    3 years ago
    104
    0
    5

  • salt

  • betrayed

  • sad

  • feelings

  • thoughts

    • Daily Prompt: Salt How it feels to love someone, but to be only betrayed by that someone.
    Never Again
    seraphicpearls Gifted Writer
    5 years ago
    88
    0
    6

  • sad

  • hurt-

  • hurt

  • betrayed

    • ......
    Shade
    wasteofpaint Commaful Star
    4 years ago
    86
    0
    6

  • evil

  • darkness

  • dark ness

  • blood

  • death

    • A short poem. TW: mention of suicide
    ๐˜“๐˜–๐˜๐˜Œ ๐˜๐˜š ๐˜ˆ ๐˜‹๐˜ˆ๐˜Ž๐˜Ž๏ฟฝ...
    eve_ Power Reader
    3 years ago
    87
    1
    6

  • coldcutcontest

  • feelings

  • poem

  • thoughts

  • love

    • This is my piece for the contest hosted by @coldcut.. The prompt I chose was "Love is a dagger" - Loki.. EDIT: I've decided to also enter this for the commaolmpics since this poem just seemed to suit...
    Spider
    philmichaelwebs Gifted Writer
    6 years ago
    80
    0
    15

  • break

  • humans

  • hurt

  • breakup

  • feelings

    • WARNING: Spiders involved. Thanks to @lindds250 for the prompt. I hope she gets rid of her spider problem soon!
    Holding Me InYour Hands(Ti...
    arivers610 Silver Comma
    7 years ago
    76
    0
    7

  • writing

  • free verse

  • sad

  • alone

  • love

    • It's a bad day but it makes for some good writing. For the daily challenge
    What I Believed.
    bebbie2000 Gold Comma
    4 years ago
    72
    0
    5

  • sad

  • betrayed

  • angst

  • random

    • angsty poem i found in my drafts idek lol
    Broken
    musical_mutt Commaful Star
    4 years ago
    65
    1
    17

  • sad

  • romance

  • love

  • death

  • loss

    • tbh i say 11+ for this story, it is super dark
    Love is stupid
    jpplus Gifted Writer
    4 years ago
    62
    1
    11

  • love

  • stupid

  • beautiful

  • amazing

  • goosebumps

    • Love is stupid - I could never be more wrong. I found love to be one of the amazing thing that could happen to me.
    Cast & Mold
    paperdoll Gifted Writer
    5 years ago
    59
    0
    4

  • cast

  • mold

  • love

  • betrayed

  • me

    • Because you are just the cast... and I am the mold
    Friendship
    anna_martinhill Gifted Writer
    5 years ago
    45
    0
    2

  • poet

  • poem

  • poems

  • poets

  • poetry

    • Liar liar pants on frickin...
    tll
    2 years ago
    39
    0
    1

  • betrayed

  • hurt-

  • hurt

  • angry

  • bruised

    • Cheater, you never loved me.
    This is All I Have to Say ...
    whispers Gifted Writer
    4 years ago
    35
    0
    1

  • sad

  • memories

  • betrayal

  • alone

  • scared

    • A few nights ago the memories of my past came back stronger than ever. I needed to write them down. So, here it is in poem version. I also tried the whole stanza rhyming and it was so difficult but I ...
    Intoxicatingly Beautiful L...
    young_author Gifted Writer
    5 years ago
    35
    0
    1

  • love

  • lies

  • betrayal

  • betrayed

    • Grand Reopening!!! :) Hope yโ€™all enjoy
    Betrayed
    queenofchaos Gifted Writer
    2 years ago
    33
    0
    0

  • betrayed

  • betrayal

  • fake friends

  • fakefriends

  • red flags

    • A poem about fake friends
    in love with the sunshine
    niylxeer Bronze Comma
    3 years ago
    29
    0
    3

  • poem

  • poetry

  • in love

  • inlove

  • sunshine

    • move, you're ruining my se...
    kaladin Bronze Comma
    a year ago
    190
    1
    17

  • move

  • selfie

  • manipulate

  • anger

  • mean

    • ๐ƒ๐ข๐ž
    aamii_ Frequent Reader
    a year ago
    152
    0
    16

  • feelings

  • daily-prompt

  • dailyprompt

  • die

  • doomed

    • I can't sleep :)
    RAGE
    musical_mutt Commaful Star
    4 years ago
    147
    0
    23

  • mad

  • rage

  • thoughts

  • mind

  • angry

    • Thoughts.
    Best Friend
    seraphicpearls Gifted Writer
    5 years ago
    122
    0
    8

  • betrayed

  • hurt-

  • hurt

  • sad

  • bestfriend

    • She was never my best friend.Just pretending to be
    Betrayal
    allayga Gifted Writer
    3 years ago
    104
    0
    5

  • salt

  • betrayed

  • sad

  • feelings

  • thoughts

    • Daily Prompt: Salt How it feels to love someone, but to be only betrayed by that someone.
    Never Again
    seraphicpearls Gifted Writer
    5 years ago
    88
    0
    6

  • sad

  • hurt-

  • hurt

  • betrayed

    • ......
    Shade
    wasteofpaint Commaful Star
    4 years ago
    86
    0
    6

  • evil

  • darkness

  • dark ness

  • blood

  • death

    • A short poem. TW: mention of suicide
    ๐˜“๐˜–๐˜๐˜Œ ๐˜๐˜š ๐˜ˆ ๐˜‹๐˜ˆ๐˜Ž๐˜Ž๏ฟฝ...
    eve_ Power Reader
    3 years ago
    87
    1
    6

  • coldcutcontest

  • feelings

  • poem

  • thoughts

  • love

    • This is my piece for the contest hosted by @coldcut.. The prompt I chose was "Love is a dagger" - Loki.. EDIT: I've decided to also enter this for the commaolmpics since this poem just seemed to suit...
    Spider
    philmichaelwebs Gifted Writer
    6 years ago
    80
    0
    15

  • break

  • humans

  • hurt

  • breakup

  • feelings

    • WARNING: Spiders involved. Thanks to @lindds250 for the prompt. I hope she gets rid of her spider problem soon!
    Holding Me InYour Hands(Ti...
    arivers610 Silver Comma
    7 years ago
    76
    0
    7

  • writing

  • free verse

  • sad

  • alone

  • love

    • It's a bad day but it makes for some good writing. For the daily challenge
    What I Believed.
    bebbie2000 Gold Comma
    4 years ago
    72
    0
    5

  • sad

  • betrayed

  • angst

  • random

    • angsty poem i found in my drafts idek lol
    Broken
    musical_mutt Commaful Star
    4 years ago
    65
    1
    17

  • sad

  • romance

  • love

  • death

  • loss

    • tbh i say 11+ for this story, it is super dark
    Love is stupid
    jpplus Gifted Writer
    4 years ago
    62
    1
    11

  • love

  • stupid

  • beautiful

  • amazing

  • goosebumps

    • Love is stupid - I could never be more wrong. I found love to be one of the amazing thing that could happen to me.
    Cast & Mold
    paperdoll Gifted Writer
    5 years ago
    59
    0
    4

  • cast

  • mold

  • love

  • betrayed

  • me

    • Because you are just the cast... and I am the mold
    Friendship
    anna_martinhill Gifted Writer
    5 years ago
    45
    0
    2

  • poet

  • poem

  • poems

  • poets

  • poetry

    • Liar liar pants on frickin...
    tll
    2 years ago
    39
    0
    1

  • betrayed

  • hurt-

  • hurt

  • angry

  • bruised

    • Cheater, you never loved me.
    This is All I Have to Say ...
    whispers Gifted Writer
    4 years ago
    35
    0
    1

  • sad

  • memories

  • betrayal

  • alone

  • scared

    • A few nights ago the memories of my past came back stronger than ever. I needed to write them down. So, here it is in poem version. I also tried the whole stanza rhyming and it was so difficult but I ...
    Intoxicatingly Beautiful L...
    young_author Gifted Writer
    5 years ago
    35
    0
    1

  • love

  • lies

  • betrayal

  • betrayed

    • Grand Reopening!!! :) Hope yโ€™all enjoy
    Betrayed
    queenofchaos Gifted Writer
    2 years ago
    33
    0
    0

  • betrayed

  • betrayal

  • fake friends

  • fakefriends

  • red flags

    • A poem about fake friends
    in love with the sunshine
    niylxeer Bronze Comma
    3 years ago
    29
    0
    3

  • poem

  • poetry

  • in love

  • inlove

  • sunshine