Hello everyone! Please give me your opinions on this poem I wrote along with others. I have never written poems before, all of these poems are my very first ones I ever wrote. So please give me your feedbacks on it. I really wanna improve writing poems as I am really passionate about it and enjoy creating poems. Waiting for your feedbacks everyone. Can’t wait to read them all and implement all the feedbacks on my next poem. Bye for now everyone! See you next time! BYE! Regards, The_death_bed