Chapter 3- Tim exposits that Wu's men ambushed his team but neither lasted long against the evolved raptors' tactics. He barely escaped and has survived in this makeshift tree-house, studying their pa...
Here's how I personally would've written Jurassic Park 3 to improve on what we got in the final product. It's 4 chapters total. I don't expect many to read it but feedback's welcome: 👍
Chapter 4 (Final)- Alan takes advantage of Wu's blurred sight and tackles him with a punch, the gun firing more. Wrestling it away, he aims at the approaching raptor and pulls the trigger only through...
Chapter 2- Waking hours later on her plane, Alan expresses disappointment at Lex going this far. She replies that she doesn't expect him or Ellie to forgive her but reiterates her desperation, as Timm...
Chapter 3- Tim exposits that Wu's men ambushed his team but neither lasted long against the evolved raptors' tactics. He barely escaped and has survived in this makeshift tree-house, studying their pa...
Here's how I personally would've written Jurassic Park 3 to improve on what we got in the final product. It's 4 chapters total. I don't expect many to read it but feedback's welcome: 👍
Chapter 4 (Final)- Alan takes advantage of Wu's blurred sight and tackles him with a punch, the gun firing more. Wrestling it away, he aims at the approaching raptor and pulls the trigger only through...
Chapter 2- Waking hours later on her plane, Alan expresses disappointment at Lex going this far. She replies that she doesn't expect him or Ellie to forgive her but reiterates her desperation, as Timm...