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madman
madmanWhere, What, When, Who, Why, How?
Fuck fuck stories

Fuck

Well fuck i'm just shit out of luck, with all this progression what's up with this depression. It just seems like regression,
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#fuck#luck#help#feedback
madman
madmanWhere, What, When, Who, Why, How?
Emotions emotion stories

Emotions

How am I supposed to deal with all these emotions? Slowly coasting, costing me my sanity wishing for my mind to be at ease, all I seek is peace please. Whenever it rains I think of you the child I nev...
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#emotion#feedback#help#poetry#pain
jessie_yessie
jessie_yessieBeggining Writer Lookin for Feedback :^)
Dilapidated poem stories

Dilapidated

Sort of long, but a poem about emotional abuse and the effects of it. Feedback is appreciated!
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#poem#jessie's stuff#sad#i guess#house
laurenholder
laurenholderCommunity member
I am looking for some feedback, new to poetry support stories

I am looking for some feedback, new to poetry

Hi, I am new to poetry and have just wrote this poem for the first time. I don't really understand the rhythm and beats etc, but this is the general jist of the words I would like to use to express m...
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#support#poetry#drowning#feedback#water
diana_otaku39
diana_otaku39☕️Coffee Bean☕️
She Tries to Hard
Chap. 4 Trapped Lighthouse poem stories

She Tries to Hard Chap. 4 Trapped Lighthouse

She Tries to Hard Chap. 4 Trapped Lighthouse
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#poem#romance#poetry#lighthouse#heartbreak
hopeautumn
hopeautumnCommunity member
Deaf-Muted feedback stories

Deaf-Muted

Can’t say how I feel
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#feedback#poet#mute#anger#poetry
lsthoughts
lsthoughtsCommunity member
- An abudance of riches. feedback stories

- An abudance of riches.

Picture this. An infinite amount of money but,
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#feedback#riches#thoughts#family#money
basharasweet
basharasweetGifted WriterComma Relay 2018 host
Feedback for Comma Relay 2018 writers stories

Feedback for Comma Relay 2018

ATTENTION please!! Comment your feedback for Comma Relay 2018!!
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#writers#feedback#commaful relay story#comma relay 2018 feedback#commaful community
n3ptunee
n3ptuneeNew to poetry really appreciate feedback
  




                           Nature
                                 is 
                         Beautiful first stories

Nature is Beautiful

This is my first poem. Any feedback is greatly appreciated. 😊
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#first#nature#new#feedback#beauty
diana_otaku39
diana_otaku39☕️Coffee Bean☕️
She Tries To Hard
Chap. 1 
Eager Artist


 feedback stories

She Tries To Hard Chap. 1 Eager Artist

She Tries To Hard is going to be a little “book” of poems I’ve written. Please read and give me any type of feedback to help me grow! This first chapter is called “Eager Artist”
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#feedback#poems#she tries to hard#book#chapter one
diana_otaku39
diana_otaku39☕️Coffee Bean☕️
She Tries To Hard
Chap. 3 Sleep Deprived chapter 3 stories

She Tries To Hard Chap. 3 Sleep Deprived

She Tries to Hard Chap. 3 Sleep Deprived
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#chapter 3#love#sleep deprived#poetry#feedback
madman
madmanWhere, What, When, Who, Why, How?
Ketchup feedback stories

Ketchup

Little tomato separated from the vine. Little tomato says he's doing just fine.
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#feedback#tomato#poetry#ketchup
madman
madmanWhere, What, When, Who, Why, How?
Trust me. trust stories

Trust me.

As you sit alone at home reviewing the calamity of insanity, over a conversation with yourself on the phone. It trips you up wondering if you should trust your own mind, telling yourself you'll be jus...
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#trust#original#words#chair#feedback
madman
madmanWhere, What, When, Who, Why, How?
Last Breathe thoughts stories

Last Breathe

Not knowing what lies ahead Slowly fear will spread
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#thoughts#poetry#original#feedback
lsthoughts
lsthoughtsCommunity member
- Zero. lust stories

- Zero.

Every relationships first steps are the same. Do you take the gamble and be different?
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#lust#relationships#love#poetry#feedback
lovesdeanthomas
lovesdeanthomasBronze CommaPart of the bts army and poetry is life,
Update writing stories

Update

Feedback would be appreciated!!!
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#writing#short story#update#feedback#challenge
hrejvia
hrejviaCommunity member
I who was help stories

I who was

Feedback please. Constructive criticism please.
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#help#life#critique#feedback#newbie