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jessie_yessie
jessie_yessieBeggining Writer Lookin for Feedback :^)
Dilapidated jessie's stuff stories

Dilapidated

Sort of long, but a poem about emotional abuse and the effects of it. Feedback is appreciated!
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#jessie's stuff#house#poem#sad#i guess
HeroTheTurtle
HeroTheTurtleBronze CommaPretty words, sad stories.
Ten Minutes to Midnight creative stories

Ten Minutes to Midnight

Rough draft of a story for my writing class. Feedback is greatly appreciated.
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#creative#feedback#help#story
laurenholder
laurenholderCommunity member
I am looking for some feedback, new to poetry emotion stories

I am looking for some feedback, new to poetry

Hi, I am new to poetry and have just wrote this poem for the first time. I don't really understand the rhythm and beats etc, but this is the general jist of the words I would like to use to express m...
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#emotion#water#feedback#poetry#drowning
diana_otaku39
diana_otaku39☕️Coffee Bean☕️
She Tries to Hard
Chap. 4 Trapped Lighthouse poetry stories

She Tries to Hard Chap. 4 Trapped Lighthouse

She Tries to Hard Chap. 4 Trapped Lighthouse
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#poetry#poem#she tries to hard#romance#heartbreak
meaningfulwords
meaningfulwordsCommunity member
Oh, Sweet Ocean.  top quotes stories

Oh, Sweet Ocean.

I'm drowning, the waves crash over me. The waves are taking me under. The current is too strong right now. How do I beat it? I can tread the water, I can swim in this storm but it's pulling me under...
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#top quotes#instagram#deep#poetry#viral
hopeautumn
hopeautumnCommunity member
Deaf-Muted mute stories

Deaf-Muted

Can’t say how I feel
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#mute#anger#feedback#love#happy
lsthoughts
lsthoughtsCommunity member
- An abudance of riches. family stories

- An abudance of riches.

Picture this. An infinite amount of money but,
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#family#riches#poor#feedback#thoughts
diana_otaku39
diana_otaku39☕️Coffee Bean☕️
She Tries To Hard
Chap. 1 
Eager Artist


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She Tries To Hard Chap. 1 Eager Artist

She Tries To Hard is going to be a little “book” of poems I’ve written. Please read and give me any type of feedback to help me grow! This first chapter is called “Eager Artist”
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#love#she tries to hard#book#poem#chapter one
diana_otaku39
diana_otaku39☕️Coffee Bean☕️
She Tries To Hard
Chap. 3 Sleep Deprived help stories

She Tries To Hard Chap. 3 Sleep Deprived

She Tries to Hard Chap. 3 Sleep Deprived
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#help#feedback#poetry#she tries to hard#romance
lsthoughts
lsthoughtsCommunity member
- Zero. relationships stories

- Zero.

Every relationships first steps are the same. Do you take the gamble and be different?
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#relationships#love#poem#zero#feelings
lovesdeanthomas
lovesdeanthomasBronze CommaPart of the bts army and poetry is life,
Update update stories

Update

Feedback would be appreciated!!!
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#update#writing#challenge#short story#feedback