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madman
madmanWhere, What, When, Who, Why, How?
Fuck help stories

Fuck

Well fuck i'm just shit out of luck, with all this progression what's up with this depression. It just seems like regression,
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#help#fuck#luck#feedback
madman
madmanWhere, What, When, Who, Why, How?
Emotions help stories

Emotions

How am I supposed to deal with all these emotions? Slowly coasting, costing me my sanity wishing for my mind to be at ease, all I seek is peace please. Whenever it rains I think of you the child I nev...
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#help#pain#poetry#emotion#feedback
laurenholder
laurenholderCommunity member
I am looking for some feedback, new to poetry water stories

I am looking for some feedback, new to poetry

Hi, I am new to poetry and have just wrote this poem for the first time. I don't really understand the rhythm and beats etc, but this is the general jist of the words I would like to use to express m...
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#water#feedback#poetry#emotion#drowning
diana_otaku39
diana_otaku39☕️Coffee Bean☕️
She Tries to Hard
Chap. 4 Trapped Lighthouse poem stories

She Tries to Hard Chap. 4 Trapped Lighthouse

She Tries to Hard Chap. 4 Trapped Lighthouse
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#poem#feedback#poetry#she tries to hard#heartbreak
basharasweet
basharasweetGifted Writer~To know me, read me😉~
Feedback for Comma Relay 2018 comma relay 2018 stories

Feedback for Comma Relay 2018

ATTENTION please!! Comment your feedback for Comma Relay 2018!!
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#comma relay 2018#commaful community#writers#comma relay 2018 feedback#feedback
diana_otaku39
diana_otaku39☕️Coffee Bean☕️
She Tries To Hard
Chap. 1 
Eager Artist


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She Tries To Hard Chap. 1 Eager Artist

She Tries To Hard is going to be a little “book” of poems I’ve written. Please read and give me any type of feedback to help me grow! This first chapter is called “Eager Artist”
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#love#book#poems#chapter one#poem
lsthoughts
lsthoughtsCommunity member
- An abudance of riches. riches stories

- An abudance of riches.

Picture this. An infinite amount of money but,
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#riches#thoughts#family#poor#money
n3ptunee
n3ptuneeNew to poetry really appreciate feedback
  




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Nature is Beautiful

This is my first poem. Any feedback is greatly appreciated. 😊
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#feedback#new#first#poem#beauty
madman
madmanWhere, What, When, Who, Why, How?
Ketchup feedback stories

Ketchup

Little tomato separated from the vine. Little tomato says he's doing just fine.
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#feedback#ketchup#tomato#poetry
madman
madmanWhere, What, When, Who, Why, How?
Trust me. feedback stories

Trust me.

As you sit alone at home reviewing the calamity of insanity, over a conversation with yourself on the phone. It trips you up wondering if you should trust your own mind, telling yourself you'll be jus...
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#feedback#trust#original#chair#words
diana_otaku39
diana_otaku39☕️Coffee Bean☕️
June sad stories

June

June was the month of friendship. July was the month of... ------ Hello hope you like this poem. Id appreciate feedback! What parts were good, which can improve or even suggestions on what to change. ...
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#sad#poem#summer vibes#help#the begining
madman
madmanWhere, What, When, Who, Why, How?
Last Breathe thoughts stories

Last Breathe

Not knowing what lies ahead Slowly fear will spread
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#thoughts#poetry#feedback#original
lsthoughts
lsthoughtsCommunity member
- Zero. lust stories

- Zero.

Every relationships first steps are the same. Do you take the gamble and be different?
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#lust#relationships#love#poetry#feedback
lovesdeanthomas
lovesdeanthomasBronze CommaPart of the bts army and poetry is life,
Update writing stories

Update

Feedback would be appreciated!!!
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#writing#short story#feedback#update#challenge
hrejvia
hrejviaCommunity member
I who was critique stories

I who was

Feedback please. Constructive criticism please.
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#critique#help#life#newbie#feedback
emcakes0
emcakes0Community member
Listen, Listen, Listen color stories

Listen, Listen, Listen

Listen. feedback please :)
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#color#poem#hope#anxiety#feelings
hmann
hmannCommunity member
Lucēre feedback stories

Lucēre

For a better viewed version, with better line breaks and an alternate version see: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1mFHqpgaUysYtsm05l48De5LcK22_rr4KqV4ChScinh4/edit?usp=sharing
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#feedback#dark#sleep#helplessness#nightmares