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Dissapointment Short Stories

Here are the top Dissapointment short stories, fanfiction, poetry, and posts on Commaful, including topics like "writing", "unappealing", and more.
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Melting Papier-mâché
stadarooni Commaful Star
6 years ago
122
0
7
Just some thoughts from back when I was working on a larger story; something that I wanted to make into a novel.

friendship breakup
paigexmiller Gifted Writer
4 years ago
58
2
7
friendship breakups are worse than romantic breakups

the never-ending riot in m...
idonthaveworth Silver Comma
2 months ago
37
1
6
a self-talk session 🖤

Lying Lifeless
t_astrid Commabassador
7 years ago
37
0
14
WARNING: this is not the second story to Janitors Closet!*** I should have listened to that warning sign telling me not to open the door but instead I did. *** This is about a snobby girl who waits fo...

I’m sorry I tried to under...
rxerikashea
3 years ago
27
0
3
You can’t help someone who doesn’t want your help.

The Negativity of an Expec...
carolineprancke Bronze Comma
8 years ago
20
0
5
when your high point is rock bottom, maybe its just best to live forgotten.

Perfect
faultypancakes
3 years ago
17
0
0
The castle of perfection.

Everyday
writer_hobby Frequent Reader
2 years ago
17
0
2
Homeless and surviving

How it started
mipoet Commaful Star
6 years ago
16
0
0
The trigger that started this inner battle of mine.

Sometimes.
rxerikashea
3 years ago
13
0
0
Sometimes you want to be an optimist

First Memory
mipoet Commaful Star
5 years ago
6
0
0
The boy rode in the pickup, eager to see his brother. He was excited. His father was grumpy as usual.

Never loved me anyways
waterthoughts Frequent Reader
3 years ago
2
0
0
A love story with a typical ending

The more loyal you are, th...
deeps
3 years ago
3
0
0
Have you ever experienced or felt this..?

,,Stop talking like you're...
faded_flower94
4 years ago
2
0
0
Flower five🌼

Family
perfect
5 years ago
1
0
0
Family

Atheist
thewallflower
5 years ago
1
0
0
Prose - just trying something new.

Let Down
waterthoughts Frequent Reader
3 years ago
1
0
0
Let down

It's suddenly cold , waiti...
faded_flower94
4 years ago
0
0
Flower seven🌼

Untitled
anon Gifted Writer
7 years ago
0
0
It’s easier to blame the hoe than youBecause I don’t want to see who are youWe had the best times everAnd I will miss them foreverI though’t I would forgive youBut you just wanted to have funAnd my he...

Melting Papier-mâché
stadarooni Commaful Star
6 years ago
122
0
7
Just some thoughts from back when I was working on a larger story; something that I wanted to make into a novel.

friendship breakup
paigexmiller Gifted Writer
4 years ago
58
2
7
friendship breakups are worse than romantic breakups

the never-ending riot in m...
idonthaveworth Silver Comma
2 months ago
37
1
6
a self-talk session 🖤

Lying Lifeless
t_astrid Commabassador
7 years ago
37
0
14
WARNING: this is not the second story to Janitors Closet!*** I should have listened to that warning sign telling me not to open the door but instead I did. *** This is about a snobby girl who waits fo...

I’m sorry I tried to under...
rxerikashea
3 years ago
27
0
3
You can’t help someone who doesn’t want your help.

The Negativity of an Expec...
carolineprancke Bronze Comma
8 years ago
20
0
5
when your high point is rock bottom, maybe its just best to live forgotten.

Perfect
faultypancakes
3 years ago
17
0
0
The castle of perfection.

Everyday
writer_hobby Frequent Reader
2 years ago
17
0
2
Homeless and surviving

How it started
mipoet Commaful Star
6 years ago
16
0
0
The trigger that started this inner battle of mine.

Sometimes.
rxerikashea
3 years ago
13
0
0
Sometimes you want to be an optimist

First Memory
mipoet Commaful Star
5 years ago
6
0
0
The boy rode in the pickup, eager to see his brother. He was excited. His father was grumpy as usual.

Never loved me anyways
waterthoughts Frequent Reader
3 years ago
2
0
0
A love story with a typical ending

The more loyal you are, th...
deeps
3 years ago
3
0
0
Have you ever experienced or felt this..?

,,Stop talking like you're...
faded_flower94
4 years ago
2
0
0
Flower five🌼

Family
perfect
5 years ago
1
0
0
Family

Atheist
thewallflower
5 years ago
1
0
0
Prose - just trying something new.

Let Down
waterthoughts Frequent Reader
3 years ago
1
0
0
Let down

It's suddenly cold , waiti...
faded_flower94
4 years ago
0
0
Flower seven🌼

Untitled
anon Gifted Writer
7 years ago
0
0
It’s easier to blame the hoe than youBecause I don’t want to see who are youWe had the best times everAnd I will miss them foreverI though’t I would forgive youBut you just wanted to have funAnd my he...