saddest poems featuring Deep

Here are the top short stories, fanfiction, poetry, and posts about Deep on Commaful, including titles such as "Uninhabitable Vitality".

Stories

Uninhabitable Vitality
mblitch
5 years ago
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Sometimes I stare at the blank ceiling and listen to the echoes of my own thoughts bouncing in my head. Sometimes I hate my own feelings and get weak at how I chose the wrong thought how now I'm scram...

Restless Deep
mblitch
5 years ago
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Drift away.

Play With Life
synthaspide Commaful Star
5 years ago
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A lovely game.

I surge forward into the v...
random.soul
5 years ago
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Thoughts when I'm alone

Dear Fisher,Sleep away you...
charliefish Gifted Writer
5 years ago
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"Laying on my bed not in but on, staring at my phone screen wishing time would get a move on." i wrote this two days ago its based on true events.

Mangled
kira Gifted Writer
5 years ago
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It's been a month, I can't bear this hurt anymore

The parcel sat wrapped up ...
kaitlyndivito2
5 years ago
27
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Now I wished I had never opened that tempting parcel.

This poem is an I, we, you...
kaitlyndivito2
5 years ago
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I am too. We all are. But you don’t see it. None of you do. You don’t see what is wrong. You don’t see what we have done and let happen. And you probably never will.

i have a friend
charliefish Gifted Writer
5 years ago
240
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"i have a friend. he saved my from my end."

Feeling hopeless sitting o...
kaitlyndivito2
5 years ago
15
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This has a deeper meaning than I’d like to admit.

The sorrow seeps into my s...
random.soul
5 years ago
15
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Random thought

i made a mistake
charliefish Gifted Writer
5 years ago
39
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"i made a mistake tonight, i started another fight." this is based on something that actually happened just about an hour ago.

writers block
charliefish Gifted Writer
5 years ago
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"its not something i'm supposed to say"

Fall
charliefish Gifted Writer
5 years ago
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"when i hit the ground, everything goes quiet," this was started after i had an accident with actually falling off a horse.

Untitled 5
piscesmoon
5 years ago
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The eternal flame of the universe

Guilt
charliefish Gifted Writer
5 years ago
17
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"Feeling responsible or regretful for a perceived offense, real or imaginary."

Typical
charliefish Gifted Writer
5 years ago
27
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"I said take these broken wings and learn to fly" honestly i just noticed that first line in so many songs i wanted to write it into something and make it mine. so i guess thats what i did?

Bloodless, and Forgotten
charliefish Gifted Writer
5 years ago
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"If when the demons come for me You recognize my fear" rather an unrefined poem about someone kind of being left behind i think, yet always loving the one who left them.

Another world...
charliefish Gifted Writer
5 years ago
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"The snow falling thick through the air, And a sound that catches me unaware,"

i lost my flair
charliefish Gifted Writer
5 years ago
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"i lost my flair for poetry but i know i can show you." this is a random fleeting attempt at a poem