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Me, me, and me. (A simpler, more eh write-up just to get my fingers moving)

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The Family That Grew Flowers

We had only been there for a day. The air was cold. - A quick story recounting the time a family in the mountains took in a group of my friends and I as part of our 'graduation process.' It was a wond...

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I'm a wreck

My mind is not where it should be, my thoughts are misguided, my emotions misplaced, and myself — wrecked. For the prompt; wrecked. an actual mess but I like it I suppose this poem (?) can serve as ...

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The truth's much more painful to say.

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My Bed is Bad

I can't sleep. - Did I rush this? Yes. Does this reflect an issue deeper than my unhealthy sleep schedule? Not really. Maybe. Hah. Jokes, I just don't sleep well in beds in general y'all. Oddly enoug...

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The People I Know

Fireworks, fireplaces, coal, and ash.

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A Strange Puzzle

Life’s a puzzle, and people carry the pieces. The puzzle looks strange, but that's how it is. Inspired by the jigsaw puzzle on the dinner table that's been unfinished for about three months now. I ha...

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I’m not okay

I’m not okay. Inactivity isn't fun, but I’ve got other things to attend to. I’m not okay, and I’m okay with that because eventually, I will be. See y’all when things clear up and I’m re-inspired!

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Wait For Me

You never truly changed. Even from the first time, to the 5th, to the now, which may be the last. (Inspired by and loosely based off of 25 Lives by Tangori)

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Rat In My Room

There was a rat in my room. It ate away at my shoes. /// Heyoooo I'm back with a somewhat strange piece recounting the time there was an actual rodent in my room. I was like, what, elementary? Anyways...

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Progress

It's not the best, but it is my best. for yesterday's prompt 'failure' I'm a pretty big supporter of "mediocre." I really think mediocre work is work worth celebrating! It means somebody tried their ...

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A Place

I’m looking for a place. A place where my heart can rest.

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I'm a bitch

Man, I am a bitch. An old and messy piece from like, way back last year. Just a quick note, in case some don't catch the message - this is my response to the situation I was once put it. It's not at...

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To The Moon At My Window

Thank you. Whew I'm really trying my best to wiggle my fingers and make something at least half-decent aye. Enjoy my little doodle! I’m trying to add a bit of flare to my stuff on here. I’m not that ...

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The First Shot

It was always a matter of who would take the first shot. (oof this one's kinda bad. I'm half asleep.)

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2337

at 2337. The title might be confusing, and I might go back to my daily posting. Just a quick reminder to anyone who has trouble sleeping like I do or experiences unpleasant things at night - there is ...

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At The Table

At the table, there are exactly six chairs. - Remade one of the first pieces I ever posted here on Commaful! Edited it a bit, changed the format a little, so I hope it's alittle better than before. En...

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Size & Sound

The new neighbours are loud. It used to be so quiet. - What a messy mess this one is. I'm still trying to get back in the groove of writing, so I'm wiggling my fingers even if the pieces come out a li...

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Leftovers

A quick little piece on a belief I've held close to since I was a child! I come from a pretty superstitious background, and I was always taught to leave a little bit of food for our 'friends.' Even wh...

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