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Unedited Poetry

Here are some Unedited poems on Commaful, including titles such as "My message for you."
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My message for you
cloudink
4 years ago
28
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1
A short poem about a one sided connection. Constructive criticism is welcomed!!

Past Tense Truths
reasonsofbeing Bronze Comma
4 years ago
23
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0
an unedited plea to the corpse of the man I once loved. heartbreak, healing, and self-love, three years later.

Do you feel broken? When m...
writinchinchila
5 years ago
4
0
0
Broken~ Written to fit with two characters from one of my books.

Yet the World Spins On
rabbit
6 years ago
0
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I honestly can't tell if this is good or not, but I wanted to try something new. Tw; blood

My message for you
cloudink
4 years ago
28
0
1
A short poem about a one sided connection. Constructive criticism is welcomed!!

Past Tense Truths
reasonsofbeing Bronze Comma
4 years ago
23
0
0
an unedited plea to the corpse of the man I once loved. heartbreak, healing, and self-love, three years later.

Do you feel broken? When m...
writinchinchila
5 years ago
4
0
0
Broken~ Written to fit with two characters from one of my books.

Yet the World Spins On
rabbit
6 years ago
0
0
I honestly can't tell if this is good or not, but I wanted to try something new. Tw; blood