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Y Poetry

Here are some Y poems on Commaful, including titles such as "Who's Listening?."
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Who's Listening?
y Silver Comma
6 years ago
312
3
43
Short story-poem-comic-thing. I'm not really sure what it is guys...

Veneer
y Silver Comma
5 years ago
114
0
3
When art doesn’t translate..

Hyper-aware
y Silver Comma
5 years ago
97
0
6
Short thing~ Digital drawing by me °3°

Chocolate and fish
y Silver Comma
5 years ago
90
1
13
Very vivid memory of a morning long ago. Champorado and tuyo (chocolate porridge-thing and dried fish). I think it was the first time I figured out that things weren't all black and white or something...

[Amid(us two,]
y Silver Comma
5 years ago
82
1
8
In the style of e.e.cummings. Cover picture of a place from google. (I notice that I use the word “waves” a lot...not on purpose, but like, what does this mean??)

Dreamer,
y Silver Comma
5 years ago
77
0
4
Triolet I wrote a while ago and animation on the frost

1:34am
y Silver Comma
5 years ago
70
0
2
Short poem..can’t get e.e.cummings out of my head :/

Duality
y Silver Comma
6 years ago
61
0
1
Once I was asked, about the different sides of me...Not exactly a chameleon, me... (Painted on March 12, 2017)

For the weary---
y Silver Comma
6 years ago
54
0
11
All pictures here, are ones I took myself. I hope you like them, dear reader!

On the line
y Silver Comma
6 years ago
48
0
2
Ah, the sky--once again you've proven to be the only thing I write about!

Kaba
y Silver Comma
5 years ago
42
0
1
“Kaba”: n. No exact translation found synonyms/similar words: “presentiment”: n. a feeling or impression that something is about to happen

What was I saying again?
y Silver Comma
6 years ago
40
0
7
People say I rhyme too much...

I miss the flowers of my h...
y Silver Comma
6 years ago
39
0
8
(flag was illustrated, 2015 -- the rest of the pictures are not my own)

To fill the pages that wer...
y Silver Comma
6 years ago
38
0
2
To the poets of this world, a Villanelle.

For we've just met--
y Silver Comma
6 years ago
32
0
2
One more attempt at a triolet. (illustrated: sometime, 2017)

Re: What will be
y Silver Comma
5 years ago
24
0
1
still stuck with the edward-estlin format..

Before the fall
y Silver Comma
6 years ago
24
0
2
Written by a wide-eyed, me from long ago. Clay sculpture by me today.

Ornithology
y Silver Comma
6 years ago
20
0
3
Drawings done during afternoon commute, 2017

Read: 12:33am
y Silver Comma
6 years ago
15
0
0
Palindrome poem--

On Track
y Silver Comma
5 years ago
16
0
0
I'm not sure if this makes any sense..but ah, yes.

Who's Listening?
y Silver Comma
6 years ago
312
3
43
Short story-poem-comic-thing. I'm not really sure what it is guys...

Veneer
y Silver Comma
5 years ago
114
0
3
When art doesn’t translate..

Hyper-aware
y Silver Comma
5 years ago
97
0
6
Short thing~ Digital drawing by me °3°

Chocolate and fish
y Silver Comma
5 years ago
90
1
13
Very vivid memory of a morning long ago. Champorado and tuyo (chocolate porridge-thing and dried fish). I think it was the first time I figured out that things weren't all black and white or something...

[Amid(us two,]
y Silver Comma
5 years ago
82
1
8
In the style of e.e.cummings. Cover picture of a place from google. (I notice that I use the word “waves” a lot...not on purpose, but like, what does this mean??)

Dreamer,
y Silver Comma
5 years ago
77
0
4
Triolet I wrote a while ago and animation on the frost

1:34am
y Silver Comma
5 years ago
70
0
2
Short poem..can’t get e.e.cummings out of my head :/

Duality
y Silver Comma
6 years ago
61
0
1
Once I was asked, about the different sides of me...Not exactly a chameleon, me... (Painted on March 12, 2017)

For the weary---
y Silver Comma
6 years ago
54
0
11
All pictures here, are ones I took myself. I hope you like them, dear reader!

On the line
y Silver Comma
6 years ago
48
0
2
Ah, the sky--once again you've proven to be the only thing I write about!

Kaba
y Silver Comma
5 years ago
42
0
1
“Kaba”: n. No exact translation found synonyms/similar words: “presentiment”: n. a feeling or impression that something is about to happen

What was I saying again?
y Silver Comma
6 years ago
40
0
7
People say I rhyme too much...

I miss the flowers of my h...
y Silver Comma
6 years ago
39
0
8
(flag was illustrated, 2015 -- the rest of the pictures are not my own)

To fill the pages that wer...
y Silver Comma
6 years ago
38
0
2
To the poets of this world, a Villanelle.

For we've just met--
y Silver Comma
6 years ago
32
0
2
One more attempt at a triolet. (illustrated: sometime, 2017)

Re: What will be
y Silver Comma
5 years ago
24
0
1
still stuck with the edward-estlin format..

Before the fall
y Silver Comma
6 years ago
24
0
2
Written by a wide-eyed, me from long ago. Clay sculpture by me today.

Ornithology
y Silver Comma
6 years ago
20
0
3
Drawings done during afternoon commute, 2017

Read: 12:33am
y Silver Comma
6 years ago
15
0
0
Palindrome poem--

On Track
y Silver Comma
5 years ago
16
0
0
I'm not sure if this makes any sense..but ah, yes.