the day i died
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znamysieco
znamysieco Community member
Autoplay OFF   •   2 months ago
well thats my first ever poem about my throughts i dont kow if its good or bad i need some real critics and i seek for it everywhere, dont mind that there is no big letter in the whole poem, it has to be like this to make u feel it. what to change? enjoy

the day i died

today i lay on your thick thighs

this is the day i felt good

i dont know why my eye cries

today is the day i felt better

i lay and i ask you for advise

today is the day i felt the best

i lay and i tell you some lies

today is the day i feel messed

i lay and we are now allies

today is the day i feel loved

i lay and make you a bad surprise

today is the day i tell you goodbyes

i lay and i see your big eyes

today is the day you cried

you told me to fight

this is the day i died

im sorry

why didnt you smile wide?

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