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yourstrulymaryzi'm thinking bout you | wattpadian
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I'm someone who has never taken a even a sip of beer in my life, but I've sought to challenge myself to a portrayal of heartbreak, and fixing things up with some alcohol. Whether I portrayed it well or not — that is up to you.

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By YoursTrulyMaryZ

Gently-

I swayed.

He put me down gently-

As the souls hit at me-

I've drank. Too much.

And I shall not cry-

Life is bored without us in pain-

I don't deserve this — or I deserve more.

My numbness no more-

To life- torture's a game.

For life is a torture-

Bid me salvation

Hear the clanking of the filled-to-the-brim beer bottles- it is like music.

Give me my numbness-

Give me my music-

Drunk on l i ba t i on s

And yet I am sober.

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a year agoReply
@sue @erofaer @bernardtwindwil @rainandsnow Thank you! Your comments make my day!

rainandsnowBronze Commabooks+music=true love
a year agoReply
@yourstrulymaryz Oh, you did portray it very well. The poetry is beautiful!

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
Hello, Beautiful. You have an artistic way of making your point. My son is an alcoholic in recovery. I read this to him on the phone. He told me it resonated with him and if he weren't sober, it would have made him cry and try stopping. The poetry is superb.

erofaerSilver CommaHow can I be impressive in one sentence?
a year agoReply
You have very lovely, original poetry.

sueCommabassadori'm strong
a year agoReply
beautiful!