Raven
Raven
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( My first attempt at something dark )

Raven

It was summer 2017, I had just turned 18 I was at some charity event that my parents asked me to go to. my friends were not there so I was alone and bored, surrounded by old men and women.

I decided to take a walk around the place That is when I found her With eyes as grey as the rainy sky.. I have never seen such bright eyes

She was standing by a fountain of chocolate She was wearing a cute white dress The most beautiful girl I had ever laid eyes on She didn't take long to notice me. She smiled in my direction

I did what any guy would do, I walked up to her "Beautiful?" I said so casually, almost like I knew her already. "Hi." She responded smiling at me. Her smile I must add was just as gorgeous as she was. "What do I call you?" I asked.

"Lilja Valdis, That's my name." ................. It was the perfect name for such a girl. .................. "Lilja, that is a beautiful and unique name." I said smiling. My name is Declan Huwick.

Declan: "Would you like to take a walk with me?" ........................... Lilja: "Sure, why not." ........................... We walked out the event building and found ourselves in the woods..

She was beautiful among the earth that surrounded us. Her white dress made her look like an angel straight from heaven. How could a stranger make me feel this way?

Declan: "So, what does your name mean?" ........................... Lilja: "It means Lily, like the flower." ............................ Declan: "So Lilja, tell me about yourself."

Lilja: "I am 20 and I am a med student, what about you?" ......................... She said 20 and a med student, everything that was out of my league. I was 18, fresh out of high school. The only thing I had going for myself was my high IQ and my rich parents.

Declan: "I am also 20." ........................... Lilja: "From the way your body tensed and you hesitated, that tells me, you are lying." ........................... Declan: "How?"

Lilja: "I can read people." ..................... Declan: "Did you learn that from med school?" ..................... Lilja: "No, I have other ways."

Declan: "I am 18." ............................. She looked disappointed for a few seconds and then she lifted her head up smiling bright. ............................. Lilja: That is my favorite number.

Declan: "How do you do that?" ....................... Lilja: "Do what?" ........................ Declan: "Smile and make everything better?"

We spent what seemed to be forever walking around those words and getting to know each other. Lilja was beautiful, and we spent every day after that together. I decided to go to her University so we can be even closer. She was the perfect girl

Nobody had anything bad to say about her. I loved her fast and hard, and I felt so peaceful and safe. I knew I had found someone who can make everything better with just a smile She was everything to me. She pushed me to work smarter and harder at everything.

She made life seem easy, even though we had some bad days. She was always the one for me. It was in the winter of 2017 I decided she should meet my family. We had lunch Everyone loved her, just the way I knew they would.

I loved her, she would walk into a room and every guy had his eyes on her. It made me jealous, but I also felt lucky to be the one to call her mine. She was a good girl, the one every guy wants to take home to meet his mother.

She was very independent and brilliant. She was the one you marry

Lilja had a hidden sadness, she was so broken. I wanted so much to take her pain away and make it all better, but I could not. The best I could do was stick by her side and love her harder.

The girl who once wore white with pride was now dressed in black. She was changing into someone new, someone I did not recognize

One day we were hanging out, she was almost like the same girl I met 12 months ago. Her phone rang, she picked it up and the look on her face changed. Her good mood was gone, and the light in her eyes was dim. She got up and started to leave

I was so confused, it was our anniversary and she was leaving me. ............................... Declan: "What happened?" ................................ Lilja: "I need to leave, I am sorry."

She smiled and left. I followed her that night, I could not bare the thought that maybe she was in trouble. I wish I never followed her She went to a bar, and I waited for her outside. She came out holding hands with a strange guy I had never seen before.

He pressed her up against the wall and kissed lips that belonged to me. How could my Lilja, my angel do this to me? I was so hurt and so confused. She was the good girl that I choose, the perfect one that I loved.

I decided to walk up to them, I had to find out what is going on. I pushed the guy off her, and punched him, I was furious. Lilja: "Declan, STOP."

She creamed at the top of her lungs I turn and walked up to her, she steps back probably thinking she is the next victim of my fist. ................................. Declan: "You scared of me now?"

Lilja: "Declan you should have stayed back." ........................... Declan: "What are you doing? Who is this filth? .................. Lilja: "My business."

Declan: "Lilja what the hell is going on?" ........................................ Lilja: "We can't be together anymore Declan."

I looked at her, holding back the emotions that are threatening to put my manhood in question. ................................. Declan: "What does that mean?"

Lilja: " I am not the girl you fell in love with, I have changed." ...................................... Declan: "No, you have not changed."

Lilja: "Declan look at me, I am not her anymore." ..................................... Declan: "You are still the same girl, you will never change to me."

Lilja: "Declan, look at me. Stop avoiding the truth." ........................... I was not ready to believe anything else had changed. I was not ready to let her go, I loved her more than anything on earth.

Lilja: "Look at me Declan, look and see the truth." ............................ I slowly walk closer to her. I let out a gasp as I notice the eyes that were as grey as the rainy sky, turn as black as the night.

Declan: "What have you done?" .................... Lilja: "I have descended, my name is Raven.

THE END.....

Sometimes we fall in love with a persons outer shell, we have no idea whats inside.. We are warned about the obvious bad girls and boys.. No one warns us about the sweet boy and girl who seem good, do everything the right way, make us fall in love.. Yet deep inside they got a doorway to hell.. Be careful who you get tangled with, you never know what lives within them..

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