waiting, wishing
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First poem in a long time. All of my emotions put in words, please be gentle. English is not my first language.

Would definitely like feedback.

waiting, wishing

waking-up in utter bliss

proof we created life from kiss

dreams, fantasies and lives fulfilled

in mere seconds a whole future built

overwhelmed by happiness and joy

unaware of universe's awful ploy

anticipation, expectation and hope

concealing an alarming pull of a tightrope

a sudden flash of pain

instigating scarlet rain

dreams, fantasies and a life erased

in mere seconds a future laid waste

darkness taking over cloud nine

thunderstorms absorbing all the sunshine

we, like the heavens, are upset

mourning someone we have never met

slowly moving through the ruins of our hearts

carefully picking up and checking all the parts

reassembling with love as glue

getting closer and stronger, just us two

the next moon held a great surprise

visions of stars and wide open skies

showed the signs of new life once more

will fate stay behind its wicked door?

anxiety, concern and despair rule

hoping the universe won't be that cruel

thinking, hoping and nothing to do but wait

weeks go by anticipating our fate

open skies become scarlet rain

desperately trying to avoid the pain

dreams, fantasies, another life gone

in mere seconds the darkness turned back on

slowly moving through the ruins of our hearts

carefully picking up and checking all the parts

reassembling with love as glue

getting closer and stronger, but still us two

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