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To Nanay Iya

She wasn't my mother, but she might as well have been. -- Whew this piece is loooooong. It's dedicated to my late nanny, Nanay (Mother) Iya! She took care of me all the way until middle school, and I ...

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My Bed is Bad

I can't sleep. - Did I rush this? Yes. Does this reflect an issue deeper than my unhealthy sleep schedule? Not really. Maybe. Hah. Jokes, I just don't sleep well in beds in general y'all. Oddly enoug...

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Leftovers

A quick little piece on a belief I've held close to since I was a child! I come from a pretty superstitious background, and I was always taught to leave a little bit of food for our 'friends.' Even wh...

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To The Moon At My Window

Thank you. Whew I'm really trying my best to wiggle my fingers and make something at least half-decent aye. Enjoy my little doodle! I’m trying to add a bit of flare to my stuff on here. I’m not that ...

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A conversation

Tried my hand at a "50 word" short story but it ended up being all dialogue?? Do contractions count as one or two words? Idk y'all. Anyways, i'm really grateful for the friends I've made on here. You ...

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At The Table

At the table, there are exactly six chairs. - Remade one of the first pieces I ever posted here on Commaful! Edited it a bit, changed the format a little, so I hope it's alittle better than before. En...

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The Family That Grew Flowers

We had only been there for a day. The air was cold. - A quick story recounting the time a family in the mountains took in a group of my friends and I as part of our 'graduation process.' It was a wond...

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Size & Sound

The new neighbours are loud. It used to be so quiet. - What a messy mess this one is. I'm still trying to get back in the groove of writing, so I'm wiggling my fingers even if the pieces come out a li...

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Rat In My Room

There was a rat in my room. It ate away at my shoes. /// Heyoooo I'm back with a somewhat strange piece recounting the time there was an actual rodent in my room. I was like, what, elementary? Anyways...

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2337

at 2337. The title might be confusing, and I might go back to my daily posting. Just a quick reminder to anyone who has trouble sleeping like I do or experiences unpleasant things at night - there is ...

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