oblivious in our bliss
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valerieBreathe. You're alive.
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When love doubles as a small escape.

oblivious in our bliss

by valerie

• a masterpiece in the flesh,

you are the strokes of my heavy heart on a canvas.

The softest petals on my skin

are how your kisses feel laying on my chest.

Gentle plucks on the strings of a harp,

create a composition of our love.

While the world frets on

about casualties

& tragedies,

we dance together with no regrets. •

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valerieBreathe. You're alive.
6 months ago
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6 months ago
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valerieBreathe. You're alive.
6 months ago
a million beautiful things



valerieBreathe. You're alive.
6 months agoReply
@bernardtwindwil Thank you for your feedback!

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
6 months agoReply
You caught an edge in me. The important think in bliss is not to let yourself become a casualty. I loved the structure with one-word verses. Say the most with the least. Great poem!!!!!

sydneyVerifiedco-creator of Commaful
6 months agoReply
beautifully done :) excellent job!

kaylynnGifted WriterAwkward writer girl @TheSilentWriter23
6 months agoReply
Love this! Your words created this description I absolutely loved and the pictures/gifs were very nicely chosen. Excellent post!!