If I
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tiredwhimsyi'm here to be happy
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I just thought if I...

If I

by tiredwhimsy

I thought if I tried hard enough,

and I mean really, really tried

If I showed you what I was willing to do,

what I would endure, what I would sacrifice for you

If I worked hard for the two of us,

I thought then, maybe then you could see

The beauty in love,

and how wonderful love feels, and how powerful its pull can be between two people...

But where was the pull?

Where was the wonder? The beauty?

Where were you?

I did it all.

Alone.

And I just thought that if I loved you enough,

maybe you'd love me back.

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tiredwhimsyi'm here to be happy
a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil thank you for our kind words. i'm very happy you liked my writing. honestly i'm also unsure if it's a story or poem but i were to categorize it i'd say poem. thanks again.

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
This poem resonates with anyone who has had an imbalanced relationship. Your writing was persuasive and succinct. I don't no if this is a story or a poem. It is so melodic. Good job.