Kiss Me Slowly
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therinamartinsWriter and Friend
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Kiss Me Slowly

by therinamartins

Sparks and fires-

Burning, shimmering, sparkling, glimmering In your eyes Glancing off your smile- Making the stars jealous

Your touch, so tender yet firm

The tone of your voice The scent that was engraved in my mind- The way your eyes spoke when your lips were closed.

But in the midst of it all I wonder;

Will it last, forever, eternal, everlasting? Will it still speak, laugh, comfort As it does now? Will your heart be as bound to mine As we are now? Or will time play the villian, the bandit?

And strip us, with a cold hand

Of everything we have, we love, we care? Leaving a solitary mark As sign of what was lost? In mocking jest and play?

Blurring the lines

Between reality and fantasy. Wil our love hold true? Be strong? Hold fast and not break? Will I still talk to you without words?

Darling,

Kiss me slowly. Hold your breath and count to ten, Wish upon a star That we will last before our time is up. And still be able to say, At the end of the day...

I love you.

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bluntpoetBronze CommaI am the weirdo smelling books' pages
a year agoReply
This poem was so romantic and had something magical... The way the beautiful images were combined with the strong meaning... So touching!

shadowpuzzleBronze CommaINTROVERT AND WEIRD AND YIE I'M 16
a year agoReply
@therinamartins Is it bad or good one? Hihi..But i love this one.

therinamartinsSilver CommaWriter and Friend
a year agoReply
@shadowpuzzle you know, I've never thought my writings were funny. But it seems people still think so, lol!

shadowpuzzleBronze CommaINTROVERT AND WEIRD AND YIE I'M 16
a year agoReply
tho 'making star jealous' huahuahauhau..

therinamartinsSilver CommaWriter and Friend
a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil wow, never heard anyone being able to sense the mood so nicely! It's amazing how people CAN notice it. Thank you, sir. I'm glad you like it!

therinamartinsSilver CommaWriter and Friend
a year agoReply
@lisa first class effort? But glad you like it!

lisaSilver CommaCats
a year agoReply
first class effort is so right! i love this! beautiful!

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
Very well structured. The graphics are chosen wisely to help convey the message of the poem. It is beautifully sentimental. I like the flow of the verses. They are so lyrical that I almost want to sing it. I believe you are a romantic. This is slow burning and sultry rather than explosively passionate. Another first class effort.