Mirror Mirror
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therinamartinsWriter and Friend
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Mirror Mirror

by therinamartins

Mirror, Mirror on the wall,

Who's the fairest of them all?

With reddened eyes and swollen lips,

Beauty weeps.

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therinamartinsSilver CommaWriter and Friend
a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil thank you!

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
First of all 7-7-7-4 as a meter works very well. The last verse goes kerplop right in the reader's lap. You have chosen the word so well that the last verse leaves us with a profound enigma. We are left by our all lonsome to ponder these last two verses. Why? What happened to her? Great job!

bobBronze CommaAll hail BOB
a year agoReply
this is interesting :O

a year agoReply
@therinamartins you are very welcome my dear :)

therinamartinsSilver CommaWriter and Friend
a year agoReply
@anominous thank you, lol! I'm honored.

a year agoReply
@therinamartins Your a strange one. :)