A Winter's Song
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This is based on a love that will remain in my past life

A Winter's Song

by thelonelywriter

As A single Flake of snow falls to the ground, so does my tear every time I am split apart from you. My heart is like ice that only you can melt. Your love is the only fire that keeps me warm.

But Just as snow melts away, so does a love that I thought would last forever. You move away to greener places and leave me numb. You freeze my heart and break it so that it never feels again....

Though I look to the frozen north... I always see your face, haunting me like a blizzard of hate and sorrow. You beg me to come back but I have changed...

Now I sit... alone in an old shack next to the fire... hoping never to set foot in the cold again. Never to feel loves embrace and to remain forever alone....forever hated...like a monster.

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4 months agoReply
@raincascade Thanks

raincascadeBronze CommaYou Make Beautiful Things
4 months agoReply
Great imagery in here and the contrast of coldness and warmth. Really creative use of comparing and continuously referencing the snow. I can really get a feel of the character's attitude towards this past love. Awesome job. Keep writing!

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6 months agoReply
@bernardtwindwil thanks I usually take the pain from my life and use it as an inspiration to write

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6 months agoReply
This was beautifully written. And it reflected a healthy attitude. I loved it. The lyrical quality of your work is a pleasure to read. Great post!!!!!