untitled. a poem
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thecomatosemy nose is bigger than your dreams.
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a dedication to the whales, beasts of the ocean. #stopthekilling

untitled. a poem

by the comatose.

i heard an echo and it clicked into my heart

so swiftly, safely.

six years ago, twenty dead corals and swears-drop upon them

hats on heads, spears with fingers --- but they weren't the worst.

it was not only a sound, but a dear reply;

i cried, said sorry.

and He said:

"if it weren't your tears i would have no place to swim in."

thank you.

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thecomatosemy nose is bigger than your dreams.
9 months agoReply
@bernardtwindwil thank you so much! glad that you understood the meanings. i appreciate it a lot. :)

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
9 months agoReply
This was well written. The symbolism was aptly put for your message. I loved it and thought it glorious. There is sweetness and rage mixed together. Your symbolism was stark and sharp. Great work!!!!!