Miss me
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theartsybeanPulling myself together
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So I wrote this because a person, whom I truly loved, decided they didn't want to be with me anymore. I can't judge them, it was fun while it lasted.

Miss me

by theartsybean

I still have our memories swimming in my head

I'm choking on all of the things I never said

I wish you missed me, because I'm falling apart

I can't believe you left without so much as a second thought

I could never hate you, or forget what we've created

Its just not fair that you're ok and I'm breaking

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sammisammanIt'll be okay.
9 months agoReply
I'm definitely Not crying, there's just something in my eye.

ritikaBronze CommaJust a thinker, bleeding ink into rhythm
9 months agoReply
This was something ... BEAUTIFUL. 🙌💛

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
9 months agoReply
Above is the attitude you believe but it is not what you poem said. It speaks in tragic terms of rejection from a sensitive and raw point of view. Your word choice exposed a heart grievously wounded. It was delicately exquisite. Your poem described an unwillingness to pass judgment on your forlorn love but it did not convey to me the "fun while it lasted", feeling. I loved this poem for the bloody raw sensuality of it. Great job!!!!!