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theartsybeanPulling myself together
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I need to stop falling in love with boys I can't have... ha ha

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by theartsybean

You're the song that is trapped in my mind

You are every single star in my sky

It's such a shame, I'll be nothing in your eyes

Even though you'll be everything in mine.

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bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
9 months agoReply
You need to stop acting precipitously on attraction and infatuation and conflating that to be love. Your anguish has been and is in this post palpable. Your writing conveys an adolescent young lady who has an overwhelming and insatiable need to have someone expressing protestations of "never ending love". "You are every single star in my sky." preceded by "You're the song trapped in my mind" are statements that have nothing to do with love and everything to do with obsession. I am sorry that apparently, nobody has talked straight talk to you. Do you have access to counseling either through your school or church? Have you discussed this with any adults in your family? I am worried about you and I certainly don't want to see you headed down the wrong path in life. You have great talent and a sharp mind. You have too many gifts to be wasted on this haphazard approach to your relationships. My heart cries for you.