Was It The Right Choice?
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tatianaim forced to deal with what i feel
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Was It The Right Choice?

by hallucinations

I gave you a choice

to stay or to leave

You chose the latter

flying away in the autumn breeze

Smells of your sweater

they still haunt me

Looking at your new heart holder

it seems like she taunts me

Maybe i'm to attention seeking

my anxiety tends to do that

I remember you

letting me wear your favorite hat

Falling into the darkness

you walk farther into the light

Down in this abyss

you're nowhere in sight

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LostInMyDreamsCommabassadorDelving deeper into the unknown
8 months agoReply
That was chilling. I can honestly say I felt your emotions. I love reading slide by slide instead of autoplay. And it came in handy reading this story. I was able to see each word come alive. Also, thumbs up on the images. They played a pivotal role in creating this touching piece!!

tatianaim forced to deal with what i feel
8 months agoReply
@origami thanks so much, I love tøp

origamifear leads to anxiety
8 months agoReply
This encompassed all of the feelings of a broken heart. Really well written! also cool tøp lyrics in your bio 👍

tatianaim forced to deal with what i feel
8 months agoReply
@bernardtwindwil thank you!!

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
8 months agoReply
This was haunting and exquisitely painful. The heart-rending verses will probably reverberate with anybody who had lost a love. Great poem!!!!

sydneyVerifiedco-creator of Commaful
8 months agoReply
Whoa ❤️