TIRED
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tatianaim forced to deal with what i feel
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TIRED

by chillnextdoor

I am tired of using the same words to describe my feelings for you. They never seem to be enough for you. They aren't enough to say. You deserve more.

I am tired of not knowing my purpose. Not knowing my worth. Not knowing what to do with my life.

I am tired of being lonely. I'm tired of giving others love and receiving near to none in return.

I am tired of life being so complicated. I'm tired of the ups and downs, why can't I just have ups.

I am tired of the pain that so many people have to deal with.

I am tired of being me.

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bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
This was good, not great but good. I am glad you posted it. I have felt those feelings myself. I think everyone pretty much has them unless you are Tim Tebow. I think you have a certain amount of lyricism that could be improved by breaking up the verses into shorter lines. Watch your syllable count. Good poem.

tatianaim forced to deal with what i feel
a year agoReply
This is not my best, but had to put it out there.