She
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tatianaim forced to deal with what i feel
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She

by chillnextdoor

Long Drives

She piles into her car and leaves for hours Never explaining where she's heading Just a silent hug And a simple nod

Closed Doors

She walks out the door and goes She won't tell me what's wrong She is a door herself I wish one day she'll be ajar

Red Lights and Tickets

Something must have been different about her leaving this time Ticket, and Ticket pile in the mail Red lights after red lights she travels again Not caring for consequences

Heartaches

Her heart clenches behind the wheel She tries and tries Never joining her mother What was she doing wrong

Terrible News

She was gone Just like her mom She was gone

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tatianaim forced to deal with what i feel
a year ago
My Story



traptluvArtist. Aspiring writer. Cynical comic.
9 months agoReply
Great!

kpkaboomFrequent Readerhas no accomplishments to put in a bio
a year agoReply
really liked the poem!! also i liked how you used the headline/title on each slide to frame each stanza.

tatianaim forced to deal with what i feel
a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil honestly, that comment meant a lot to me. Thank you so much!

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
I just read an excellent poem. The technical manipulation of meter and rhythm was masterful. The theme was dark.The whole effort including the graphics worked together to bring us to an inevitable conclusion. Great job!

chromiumSilver CommaI like to think I'm amazing
a year agoReply
wow what a story :O