Purpose?
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tanyahasijaI've created some stuff... :D
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A sad emo poem about the uncertainty of the future and the crippling fear that comes along with it. :D But hey at least I've got a nice colorful theme going on in the background lmao. Hope you like it. Reviews are always appreciated. (^_^)

Purpose?

by tanyahasija

When did I lose my sense of purpose?

How did I forget where I belong?

Starting to feel like I deserve this,

No sense of direction I walk alone.

At the end of the tunnel there is no light,

I don't even know where it leads to anymore,

And tomorrow doesn't seem so bright,

Have no fight left in me for sure.

A blurry screen lies between me and the future,

Which made me anxious from the start,

Parts of me held by weak sutures,

I'm afraid that I might just fall apart.

Where should I go? What is my calling?

I've forgotten all about it and now I'm just rolling.

Aimlessly wandering,

On the path that is lost itself,

I'm walking and pondering,

What put me on the shelf?

I need a sign, I need a clue,

I'm sick of trying, I'm feeling blue.

On the brink of losing faith,

Still I drink up my fears & keep my head straight.

But this pretense can't go on for a long time,

So just hear me out O'Great Divine!

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tarekkasperAnother lost kid looking for his soul
a year agoReply
<3 thnx a lot I'm glad u liked it and I'm glad to advice and listen to advice about my writings ^_^

tanyahasijaI've created some stuff... :D
a year agoReply
@tarekkasper Oh okay I got it! Thanks for the suggestion. Also, Nightmare was so amazingly written! Totally loved it. (^_^)

tarekkasperAnother lost kid looking for his soul
a year agoReply
@tanyahasija oh you are welcome And sorry I meant rhymes ^_^ and I'm not gonna act like an expert But rhymes "as I know" have many types I don't know how to explain but it's smth like Fight...night Food..good So your writing will look more like a poem than a story you made some great rhymes but I think if you had mad e some more in your writing will be more attracting and again I'm not an expert but this wht I do if you have some time go check my poem "nightmare" and you are welcome and it's my pleasure

tanyahasijaI've created some stuff... :D
a year agoReply
@tarekkasper Heyyy thanks! I'm glad that you liked it. And I really appreciate your review but could elaborate just a bit about what you said about the rhythms? :D

tarekkasperAnother lost kid looking for his soul
a year agoReply
i really liked it keep it up just try next time to focus more on rhythms it gives a nice formation but it still very good and very deep ^_^ @tanyahasija