Time
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tabnash24You'll know me as you read ;)
Autoplay OFF  •  a year ago
Time's very precious so let's make most out of it while we can ;)

Time

by tabnash24

Today will someday become a history,

just as the future will reveal a mystery.

Soon everyone will bid farewell to thee,

for it's all written in the decree.

Sparing us each second that you could,

stood continuous on your foot.

Gave us all that we would need,

for life, it's essential indeed.

Importance of you is everyone's priority,

without you, everyone fails even in majority.

For chasing you is on everyone's mind,

and that's why we call you the precious 'time'.

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tabnash24Silver CommaYou'll know me as you read ;)
a year ago
Asleep

tabnash24Silver CommaYou'll know me as you read ;)
4 months ago
Resonating

tabnash24Silver CommaYou'll know me as you read ;)
a year ago
If You Tell
Sometimes sharing your problems is one solution it...



tabnash24Silver CommaYou'll know me as you read ;)
a year agoReply
Honestly, I'll admit one thing that since the time I joined commaful I saw your comment is the most descriptive one and in this poem I remembered you reminding me of the meter for one of my old poems , that's why kinda kept that in mind and proceeded with this so thank you to you, @bernardtwindwil :)

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
You said we will know you by your writing. You are fulfilling that prophecy. "It is time time time in a sort of runic rhyme." You described time so eloquently that i was in awe.

tabnash24Silver CommaYou'll know me as you read ;)
a year agoReply
thanks, @pluto :)

plutoSilver CommaPlanets man
a year agoReply
wow this is amazing!