Some Derelict Spirit
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tabnash24
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Sometimes we need to accept some rejections and learn to move on instead of pressing the person we liked. :)

Some Derelict Spirit

by tabnash24

Recall something what made you adore,

that very person whom you once thought was in galore.

Think about the time when you were still humble

to the one whom you once wanted to fondle.

Evoke your spirits to that time,

where you just wanted to cherish and call her "mine".

After that look at your state now,

think about how your tenacity scares her.

Imagine how she's able to sleep at night anyhow,

for thoughts of you now haunts her.

Now the choice is yours,

press or drop the idea of having any contact.

For you caused a loss,

by keeping your thoughts about her intact.

Better it'll be if you give up on that lost viscid,

think about it all once for a bit.

Move on like a man with your face rigid,

and let her see that she made somebody strong instead of 'some derelict spirit' .

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tabnash24Silver CommaYou'll know me as you read ;)
a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil Oh now I get it, so it was a trendy pick up line back then by the way, thanks for the info though. :)

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a year agoReply
@tabnash24 Le poo poo (shit) en le tete (on the head) I t is a colloquialism for getting dumped by a girl, or jilted, a break-up​ initiated by the other person. When I was in college in 1962 and some later some of the guys formed a club called the brown helmet brigade Because we were getting dumped on so often. As you can see it didn't bother us that much. We would sit around and laugh about the causes of our break ups.

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a year agoReply
This both broke my heart and lifted it at the same time.

tabnash24Silver CommaYou'll know me as you read ;)
a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil Thank you! I think we all go through this at least once and by the way, what exactly does "le poo poo en le tete" mean? 😮

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
Oh my, yes. If you get "le poo poo en le tete" move on or move up. I have a terrible tension arising inside me when I see all the young ones digging themselves into an early grave, carrying on with a rending of clothes and flesh in the face of a puppy love rejection. You see your boy or girlfriend kissing someone else, so what, as long as he or she still kisses you. It's infatuation, not possession. Great message!!!!