Shoelace
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tabnash24You'll know me as you read ;)
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Here, I came up with a short poetry about a teenager's silly instant dreams because of it's naughty unstable hormones. ;)

Was actually inspired by a TV serial. xD

Shoelace

by tabnash24

Those brown eyes landed on me with a glint of smirk,

making me wonder if today my looks were about to spark.

Surprised was that little figure of mine,

standing infront of a tall bodied masculine.

The closer that gorgeous face began to bent,

faster the blood in my heart got spent.

Lost were my dreams by the end of his approaching pace,

for that handsome came near, just to tie my 'shoelace'.

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tabnash24Silver CommaYou'll know me as you read ;)
a year ago
When you...
Inspired by somebody's smile :)

tabnash24Silver CommaYou'll know me as you read ;)
a year ago
Trouble With The Rhymes
I was wondering when exactly will I get to release...

tabnash24Silver CommaYou'll know me as you read ;)
a year ago
Why?
Was written after the Paris Attack. Hope peace wil...



tabnash24Silver CommaYou'll know me as you read ;)
8 months agoReply
Thank you, @sebiera! 😇

sebieraBooks, talking, frnds and history's life
8 months agoReply
Superb!!

tabnash24Silver CommaYou'll know me as you read ;)
a year agoReply
@_notlikeothers_ I'm glad to see you enjoyed it and thank you! Keep reading. ^^

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a year agoReply
Hahahahaha I love it!! It's just soo good

tabnash24Silver CommaYou'll know me as you read ;)
a year agoReply
@hawkins8483 lol come to Fb, I'll tell you where this came from and what is it about

hawkins8483wake me up, when am done reading this
a year agoReply
@tabnash24 he's well talked about or mybe I didn't understand it well

tabnash24Silver CommaYou'll know me as you read ;)
a year agoReply
@hawkins8483 lol how come?

hawkins8483wake me up, when am done reading this
a year agoReply
lucky was that handsome

tabnash24Silver CommaYou'll know me as you read ;)
a year agoReply
@shadowpuzzle you're welcome and it's really okay if you do it again but leave a translation with it. I'll get to learn new things. *^*

shadowpuzzleBronze CommaINTROVERT AND WEIRD AND YIE I'M 16
a year agoReply
thank you from this woderful poem hihi :) and still sorry if i'd comment a stranger dialect from yours .