I don't know
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tabnash24
tabnash24You'll know me as you read ;)
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Wrote this two or three years ago, I guess?

I don't know

by tabnash24

I don't know...

what's with this funny feeling,

but when he's online,

I find myself wide gleaming.

I don't know...

why my thoughts are now swimming,

but when his words appear,

they seem to be screaming.

I don't know...

how does he look like,

but wait,

why am I even eager to know how does his smile seems like?

I don't know...

honestly, what's with me these days,

thinking about a boy whose name doesn't even sound safe.

I don't even know...

why did I just spare a page for his case?

Yet I'm still curious to read,

maybe he feels the same just incase?

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6 months agoReply
@sydney Thank you and... Hahah, guess we all had this kind of an experience up on the Internet.

sydneyVerifiedco-creator of Commaful
6 months agoReply
Beautiful poem. I feel the same way about my crushes when fb first hit my school some years back. I'd sit and wait all night u til my crush went offline. Hoping

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6 months agoReply
@bernardtwindwil Thank you and Goodluck to you @tdog16, stay strong! :)

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6 months agoReply
Absolutely wonderful! I have an online lover and I have the same feelings! You nailed it dude!

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6 months agoReply
Ohhhhhh...the giddiness of an infatuation hits us with emotions we've never felt before. You have described them perfectly in this poem. The free verse is lyrical and charming. I loved it. Great poem!!!!!!