Awoken
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Awoken

by Steve Marsden

You woke me like a sunbeam square in my eyes,

I was slumbering, like a cat in disguise,

Independent but lost, Unaware of the cost,

You brought me to happiness as the crow flies

Furious, writhing, knotted, barbed snakes of angst,

Fully forced out the breath of life, and their fangs

Poisoned the positive, Tightly held me captive,

You unbound me from intangible chain gangs

(C) 2017

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7 months agoReply
@bernardtwindwil Thank you, Bernard.

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7 months agoReply
@angelatsng Thanks!

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7 months agoReply
This was well written. The word choice you provided eloquently delivered your message. Great post!!!!

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7 months agoReply
This sounds like a poem. It's really good. Keep it up!! <3

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@tdog16 Thanks, glad you liked it. :)

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That was short but sweet! The strong words delivered a bold story that the story was told with such emotion in such little space. AWESOME post!