Undefeated
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What does forevermore feel like?

Undefeated

What does forevermore feel like?

Is it a static screensaver,

Is it a static screensaver, white noise flavoured in a thousand noiseless wishes?

Is it a static screensaver, white noise flavoured in a thousand noiseless wishes? Or is it a memory that blushed

Is it a static screensaver, white noise flavoured in a thousand noiseless wishes? Or is it a memory that blushed against the hushing hues of the tangerine sky?

It’s a moment where the slushing shades of sunset

It’s a moment where the slushing shades of sunset caressed the whisper of wind to a song of starlight,

It’s a moment where the slushing shades of sunset caressed the whisper of wind to a song of starlight, my heart brushed like a polka-dot of rainbows

It’s a moment where the slushing shades of sunset caressed the whisper of wind to a song of starlight, my heart brushed like a polka-dot of rainbows that outshone a sprinkling canvas of twinkles.

I didn’t need constellations of zigzags

I didn’t need constellations of zigzags when the shape of a smile could stop time,

but it left the heartbeats and hopes over the horizon.

Yet, even if the night dulls the pastels into doldrums,

Yet, even if the night dulls the pastels into doldrums, my dreams will always drift to tomorrow, undefeated.

(Aside) Hey, Commaful! I don't know how good this one is, but I felt like writing something tonight and I feel happy right now, so this came out. :)

I wanted to write something about hope that didn't feel too positive or cheery, but still uplifting in the end. I hope that, in terms of how I wrote this piece, that it might have been a bit different stylistically from what you all might be used to (AKA less alliteration, lol). :D

One thing that I stopped myself from doing, while writing, was making this piece about romantic love (it was about that in a draft) and to make it about the narrator and reflection, too! If any of you ever feel hopeless and dull, just remember that a new day can bring fresh eyes.

You all take good care and keep on writing! Never forget how special you all are, Commaful! <3

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